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Just A by =OgenB:iconOgenB:



^Just A^
By Brenden Smith

I am just a shell and
I echo all my pain out,
in a never ending howl.

I am just a tree
With the bark removed.
I still stand,
But I am dead.

I am just a ocean of tears.
Made by all the people,
Who have never loved me.

I am just a crow.
Feeding off my
Own dead insides.

I am just a skull.
All the seeming
Of a human
But drained of life.

I am just me...
And that’s the worst one.
©2006-2009 =OgenB
:iconogenb:

Author's Comments

One of those Emo poems EL YAYS!

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:iconiron-fox:
the poem seems to have it's own personality.

As if it's been searching through the ages for something it will never find. and it knows that but it does'nt care. because hope has turned into the motive of sucide. :(

Good poem!!!

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Beware of Color-blind A.D.D. Artist!
.IRON FØX.
:iconbeyondmortalfear:
A good ending.

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Always throwing parties...to cover the silence.
:iconcanofzoo:
My god. :tears: When I first read the title I thought it was going to be one of those slit wrist poems. But this is fucking beautiful. I love the comparisons used. Something I feel like I can really relate to. Nice way to end it as well. :aww:
:iconogenb:
Thanks so much =)

--
Love and hate are the same in the same way up and down are the same, both are directions that go different ways.

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